口哨
方世开

我一向不善抒情。在梅岭
一片广阔的毛竹林里
斑鸠，画眉，一群群不知名的鸟儿
在竹枝的展台上，轮番竞技歌喉
我的心跳骤然加速
情不自禁地学起鸟的模样
轻轻地吹起了口哨

whistle  
方世开 译

I have never been good at expressing feelings. In Meiling
A vast bamboo forest
Turtledoves，thrushes，flocks of unknown birds
On the exhibition booth of bamboo branch，take turns to compete for singing voice
My heart beaten fast suddenly
I couldn't help learning to look like a bird
Whistled softly.

欣赏。。。。

My heart beat fast suddenly
I can't help learning to look like a bird
Whistle softly.

-----时态就按前面几行的基调，最后这三行统一一下吧~

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许剑桐 发表于 2022-1-6 15:47
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谢谢剑桐老师！

许剑桐 发表于 2022-1-6 15:46
My heart beat fast suddenly
I can't help learning to look like a bird
Whistle softly.

亦可