便条 林木译

我吃了
冰柜
中
你

大概
留作
早餐的
李子

原谅我
它们好吃
又甜
又凉

This Is Just To Say  
William Carlos Williams

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

日安。这首诗好眼熟啊
好译 & 有意思的便条诗！

人土土 发表于 2021-1-6 10:48
日安。这首诗好眼熟啊
好译 & 有意思的便条诗！

问好土斑斑。有人模仿过~~

好诗，佳译

大河原 发表于 2021-1-6 16:08
好诗，佳译

谢谢问好！