这首英文小诗,内容很一般。难点主要是每一句起首是按英文字母顺序，直到结尾。我想比较让人为难的地方是X,Y,Z的处理。我只是做个尝试，希望年轻的朋友能喜欢。这首诗歌在英国的诗歌比赛里获得了优胜奖。 注: From A to Z 英文的意思是从头至尾。                                                        A to Z A familiar and strange city Before I’m gonna face the clamors Consciously I dotted my calm youth in a violet diary Day is getting brighter Eyes are shining with hope Failures are road signs on the path to success Granting that I haven’t noticed it How should I go I everyday long for a hug Just a little romance Keep my want in your mind Love doesn’t need to explain My love for you will be from A to Z Now I wanna be Offensive but Perhaps I need more courage Quitting the Internet, I tried to forget so many bored words Rang a friend and went to movies Said “hello” to a stranger staring at me Tasted the hot food first time Unable to cover up my smiling and joy from face to heart “V” is a symbol of encouragement for me today When I defeated the fear “X”, “Y”, “Z” represent uncertainties which I’d like to call them “future”, “love” and “life”

最好 能有汉语的翻译。

王登学 发表于 2020-6-28 11:21
最好 能有汉语的翻译。

偷懒了。谢谢光临赏读。问好祝福！

庞关雨 发表于 2020-10-9 18:37
您好© 柔丝君，X,Y,Z的处理。要联系上下文考虑，诗歌到了结尾，一般都是妙笔收官，很肯能大意是“可 ...

谢谢光临指正。问好祝福！

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             A to Z   
  从 头 到 尾，我 的 约 会


A familiar and strange city
这座城市，我面对在即，
Before I’m gonna face the clamors
感觉妳陌生，可又很熟悉；
Consciously I dotted my calm youth in a violet diary
我的平淡青春，我的青涩日记，无意间啊——将留在这里：
Day is getting brighter
看呐，天色渐渐明亮，
Eyes are shining with hope
是的，我的目光闪着希望，
Failures are road signs on the path to success
如果受挫，如果不堪，嗯，指南，权作成功指南，
Granting that I haven’t noticed it
是啊，如何去做，如何去做，
How should I go
我的未知啊，还很多很多；


I everyday long for a hug
抱一下吧，该有小浪漫，
Just a little romance
嘘——天天都在想，想过一天天；
Keep my want in your mind
记着吧，总该记着吧，
Love doesn’t need to explain
要妳这份爱，还要解释吗；
My love for you will be from A to Z
爱妳呀真爱妳，我将始终不渝；
Now I wanna be
虽说该主动，
Offensive but
可——可，也许——
Perhaps I need more courage  
我得更加有勇气；


Quitting the Internet, I tried to forget so many bored words
忘了吧，线上真没劲，拜拜吧，一段一段聊天码，嗨，去影吧呀，
Rang a friend and went to movies
电话网友她，喂——咱们去影吧；
Said “hello” to a stranger staring at me
“您好”对瞠目，“您好”寒暄对陌生，
Tasted the hot food first time
第一次啊——哇——品尝热东东；
Unable to cover up my smiling and joy from face to heart
啊——喜形于色呀，我不能自已，
“V” is a symbol of encouragement for me today
旗开得胜啊，成功有象征，
When I defeated the fear
啊——欢欣鼓舞啊，我疑虑全无，
“X”, “Y”, “Z” represent uncertainties which I’d like to call
“X”, “Y”, “Z”呀，我该称之未知数——
them “future”, “love” and “life”
是嗯——他们是将来——相生相爱同舟渡 ... ...

_李世纯_ 发表于 2021-10-15 21:30
诚请柔丝元老，大家一同探讨

             A to Z   

勘误：

是啊——他们是将来——相生相爱同舟渡 ... ...