Your Grace Voice
By Yu Weiyuan

Among so many a voice，yours' the nicest
to which I'm never tired of listening
Being my eyes closed，now I'm listening 
Luckily l also see you
A flower. Hand in hand with sunbeams singing and dancing
A little one，yet embraces heavenly happiness


你的声音真好听
作者：俞伟远

众多声音，你的最好听
一直没听厌
闭眼，听你
看到你了：一朵花
牵着阳光唱着跳着
小巧，怀抱天大的快乐

精致的小诗，欣赏了，问好俞老师~

Being my eyes closed----- being 去掉会不会好一点？

grace voice

可否用pleasant voice , agreeable voice, nice voice, lovely voice, beautiful voice, etc   

许剑桐 发表于 2022-6-1 15:55
Being my eyes closed----- being 去掉会不会好一点？

嗯。对。改一下。

许剑桐 发表于 2022-6-1 15:59
grace voice

可否用pleasant voice , agreeable voice, nice voice, lovely voice, beautiful voice, et ...

lovely或nice，口语化一点。

俞伟远(浙江） 发表于 2022-6-1 16:09
lovely或nice，口语化一点。

多谢多谢！

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693期，谢谢赐稿哦~