Mo Ming：Taiwan's Moon

In Taiwan, people can see the process of total lunar eclipse.
In the coastal areas of the mainland
Because of the continuous drizzle, the sky is dark.
So, someone is proudly showing off this.

I knew when I was a child that the legendary Tiangou ，
It can't swallow the moon.
The truth is the same as I thought,
Soon， The moon appeared bright in the sky.

Taiwan and Chinese Mainland have the same moon.
Ancient legends related to lunar eclipses have the same origin.
We should unite,
We played gongs, drums and firecrackers.
Let's drive the “dog ”away.

（中译英）

莫名：台湾之月

台湾看得见月全食
大陆沿海地区
连绵细雨，天空黑蒙蒙
于是有人在得瑟

我从小就知道，天狗
吃不了月亮
事实也是如此
一会就皓月当空

台湾和大陆的月亮是同一个
连古老传说也有一样起源
我们何妨联手
敲锣打鼓，放炮。把狗赶走

学习！！！！！

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We should unite,
We played gongs, drums and firecrackers.  —— 时态统一下更好~

翻译跟进及时

谢谢老师指正！

We will unite to strike gongs and drums and set off firecrackers. We can drive the dog away.

最后一句不用改吧，可以用双引号？

莫名 发表于 2022-11-11 17:23
We will unite to strike gongs and drums and set off firecrackers. We can drive the dog away.

ok..............................