忒绿诗歌 发表于 2023-3-2 07:30
are poetries. no word muttered out. Better?:

The final version


Years Cannot Be Recited

years cannot be recited
only for you to remember
are poetries
not romantic at all
time is water
coming over in white
and in white flowing away
who
rings whose bell?
ripples weave an invisible web
a boat with a pair of oars
bit by bit
paddles into the profound lake of the starry night
the leaves falling and the tree shaking a little
winds
blow off the memory
touching my face
my mouth slightly open
no words muttered out

are poetries. no word muttered out. Better?:

谢青未君来读赏评：handshake

only for you to remember
is poetry

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no words mutter out



———— 精确一点嘛~。我只能给你打分98了~

写得这么好，我忍不住复制了一遍~

不能朗诵的岁月
文｜忒绿

岁月是不能朗诵的。
只能让你记住的，
是诗，
一点都不浪漫。
时间是水，
白白的，流来；
白白的，流走。
谁
敲响了谁的铃铛？
涟漪织成看不见的网。
一片舟，一副桨。
一下一下，
划进星夜的心湖。
叶子落下，树有些晃动。
风
摇落了记忆。
摸我的脸，张了张嘴，
没说出话来。